Merge 0e88b0933c into 9bf6ffe166

In the --help text we really should use the official spelling, just like
in the man page.

man/systemd-cryptenroll.xml

@@ -265,32 +265,11 @@
   </refsect1>
 
   <refsect1>
-    <title>Options</title>
+    <title>Unlocking</title>
 
-    <para>The following options are understood:</para>
+    <para>The following options are understood that may be used to unlock the device in preparation of the enrollment operations:</para>
 
     <variablelist>
-      <varlistentry>
-        <term><option>--password</option></term>
-
-        <listitem><para>Enroll a regular password/passphrase. This command is mostly equivalent to
-        <command>cryptsetup luksAddKey</command>, however may be combined with
-        <option>--wipe-slot=</option> in one call, see below.</para>
-
-        <xi:include href="version-info.xml" xpointer="v248"/></listitem>
-      </varlistentry>
-
-      <varlistentry>
-        <term><option>--recovery-key</option></term>
-
-        <listitem><para>Enroll a recovery key. Recovery keys are mostly identical to passphrases, but are
-        computer-generated instead of being chosen by a human, and thus have a guaranteed high entropy. The
-        key uses a character set that is easy to type in, and may be scanned off screen via a QR code.
-        </para>
-
-        <xi:include href="version-info.xml" xpointer="v248"/></listitem>
-      </varlistentry>
-
       <varlistentry>
         <term><option>--unlock-key-file=<replaceable>PATH</replaceable></option></term>
 
@@ -328,7 +307,45 @@
 
         <xi:include href="version-info.xml" xpointer="v256"/></listitem>
       </varlistentry>
+    </variablelist>
+  </refsect1>
 
+  <refsect1>
+    <title>Simple Enrollment</title>
+
+    <para>The following options are understood that may be used to enroll simple user input based
+    unlocking:</para>
+
+    <variablelist>
+      <varlistentry>
+        <term><option>--password</option></term>
+
+        <listitem><para>Enroll a regular password/passphrase. This command is mostly equivalent to
+        <command>cryptsetup luksAddKey</command>, however may be combined with
+        <option>--wipe-slot=</option> in one call, see below.</para>
+
+        <xi:include href="version-info.xml" xpointer="v248"/></listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+
+      <varlistentry>
+        <term><option>--recovery-key</option></term>
+
+        <listitem><para>Enroll a recovery key. Recovery keys are mostly identical to passphrases, but are
+        computer-generated instead of being chosen by a human, and thus have a guaranteed high entropy. The
+        key uses a character set that is easy to type in, and may be scanned off screen via a QR code.
+        </para>
+
+        <xi:include href="version-info.xml" xpointer="v248"/></listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+    </variablelist>
+  </refsect1>
+
+  <refsect1>
+    <title>PKCS#11 Enrollment</title>
+
+    <para>The following option is understood that may be used to enroll PKCS#11 tokens:</para>
+
+    <variablelist>
       <varlistentry>
         <term><option>--pkcs11-token-uri=<replaceable>URI</replaceable></option></term>
 
@@ -361,7 +378,15 @@
 
         <xi:include href="version-info.xml" xpointer="v248"/></listitem>
       </varlistentry>
+    </variablelist>
+  </refsect1>
 
+  <refsect1>
+    <title>FIDO2 Enrollment</title>
+
+    <para>The following options are understood that may be used to enroll PKCS#11 tokens:</para>
+
+    <variablelist>
       <varlistentry>
         <term><option>--fido2-credential-algorithm=<replaceable>STRING</replaceable></option></term>
         <listitem><para>Specify COSE algorithm used in credential generation. The default value is
@@ -461,7 +486,15 @@
 
         <xi:include href="version-info.xml" xpointer="v249"/></listitem>
       </varlistentry>
+    </variablelist>
+  </refsect1>
 
+  <refsect1>
+    <title>TPM2 Enrollment</title>
+
+    <para>The following options are understood that may be used to enroll TPM2 devices:</para>
+
+    <variablelist>
       <varlistentry>
         <term><option>--tpm2-device=<replaceable>PATH</replaceable></option></term>
 
@@ -636,7 +669,15 @@
 
         <xi:include href="version-info.xml" xpointer="v255"/></listitem>
       </varlistentry>
+    </variablelist>
+  </refsect1>
 
+  <refsect1>
+    <title>Other Options</title>
+
+    <para>The following additional options are understood:</para>
+
+    <variablelist>
       <varlistentry>
         <term><option>--wipe-slot=<replaceable>SLOT<optional>,SLOT...</optional></replaceable></option></term>
 

shell-completion/bash/systemd-cryptenroll

@@ -38,19 +38,12 @@ __get_tpm2_devices() {
     done
 }
 
-__get_block_devices() {
-    local i
-    for i in /dev/*; do
-        [ -b "$i" ] && printf '%s\n' "$i"
-    done
-}
-
 _systemd_cryptenroll() {
     local comps
     local cur=${COMP_WORDS[COMP_CWORD]} prev=${COMP_WORDS[COMP_CWORD-1]} words cword
     local -A OPTS=(
         [STANDALONE]='-h --help --version
-                     --password --recovery-key'
+                     --password --recovery-key --list-devices'
         [ARG]='--unlock-key-file
                --unlock-fido2-device
                --unlock-tpm2-device
@@ -116,7 +109,7 @@ _systemd_cryptenroll() {
         return 0
     fi
 
-    comps=$(__get_block_devices)
+    comps=$(systemd-cryptenroll --list-devices)
     COMPREPLY=( $(compgen -W '$comps' -- "$cur") )
     return 0
 }

src/cryptenroll/cryptenroll.c

@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ static int help(void) {
                "\n%3$sSimple Enrollment:%4$s\n"
                "     --password        Enroll a user-supplied password\n"
                "     --recovery-key    Enroll a recovery key\n"
-               "\n%3$sPKCS11 Enrollment:%4$s\n"
+               "\n%3$sPKCS#11 Enrollment:%4$s\n"
                "     --pkcs11-token-uri=URI\n"
                "                       Specify PKCS#11 security token URI\n"
                "\n%3$sFIDO2 Enrollment:%4$s\n"

src/shutdown/shutdown.c

@@ -182,10 +182,8 @@ static int switch_root_initramfs(void) {
  *  Writeback
  *  Dirty
  *
- * Return true if the sum of these fields is greater than the previous
- * value input. For all other issues, report the failure and indicate that
- * the sync is not making progress.
- */
+ * Return true if the sum of these fields is changed from the previous value input. For all other issues,
+ * report the failure and indicate that the sync is not making progress. */
 static int sync_making_progress(unsigned long long *prev_dirty) {
         _cleanup_fclose_ FILE *f = NULL;
         unsigned long long val = 0;
@@ -211,15 +209,13 @@ static int sync_making_progress(unsigned long long *prev_dirty) {
                         continue;
 
                 errno = 0;
-                if (sscanf(line, "%*s %llu %*s", &ull) != 1) {
-                        log_warning_errno(errno_or_else(EIO), "Failed to parse /proc/meminfo field, ignoring: %m");
-                        return false;
-                }
+                if (sscanf(line, "%*s %llu %*s", &ull) != 1)
+                        return log_warning_errno(errno_or_else(EIO), "Failed to parse /proc/meminfo field: %m");
 
                 val += ull;
         }
 
-        r = *prev_dirty > val;
+        r = *prev_dirty != val;
         *prev_dirty = val;
         return r;
 }